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TITLE (EDIT)
White Phantom Chapter Seven, The Body
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TITLE KEYWORD
Horror
AUTHOR
Sooz
ABOUT THE AUTHOR
Sooz, Pseudonym: Kat Black: Katherine Black: Jane doe: Sue Simpson.

Lizards Leap: Kat Black
Keepers of the Quantum: Sue Simpson
Better The Devil You Know: Sue Simpson
People on the Edge: Sue Simpson
Rat-a-tat-tat: Katherine Black
Dark Around the Edges: Katherine BlackMy Name is Jane Doe: Jane Doe

All available on Amazonuk and in local bookshops.

Sooz 44, lives in Barrow-in-furness with one dog, ninteen mad reptiles, one man and one of two sons.


[January 2008]
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Fag-It Girls (Poetry) Saw these two while I was out getting a butty. [189 words]
Famous (Poetry) It's hard being famous! [92 words] [Humor]
Figures (Short Stories) Observational [549 words] [Psychology]
Friday 11th Jan 2008 (Non-Fiction) New lizard arriving today. [2,828 words] [Biography]
Friday 18th January 2008 Some Sexual Content (Non-Fiction) *Decency warning* contains some sexual reference [2,151 words] [Psychology]
It Ws Only A Name (Short Stories) Murder Mystery [2,440 words] [Mystery]
Jane Doe Seven 2008 (Non-Fiction) New year, new book, here we go again. [976 words] [Biography]
Jane Doe Thursday 10th January 2008 (Non-Fiction) The Ark is full, but what's one more lizard? [714 words] [Biography]
Saturday 12th Jan. (Non-Fiction) Muses on writing and ponderings on life... and almost no lizards! [1,296 words] [Biography]
Thursday 17th Jan (Non-Fiction) Ructions [1,252 words] [Psychology]
Wednesday 16th Jan 2008 (Non-Fiction) - [1,252 words] [Psychology]
Wednesday 16th Jan 2008, Bloody Kids (Non-Fiction) Jane doe .... and domstics [1,350 words] [Psychology]
White Phantom Chapter Five (Novels) Unexpected visitor [2,555 words] [Horror]
White Phantom Chapter Four (Novels) Repercussions...After killing a man, Beth decides what to do next .. and meets Phantom [4,663 words] [Thriller]
White Phantom Chapter One (Novels) Sometimes we make choices that can ruin lives. [623 words] [Thriller]
White Phantom Chapter Six (Novels) I know what you did last night [2,328 words] [Horror]
White Phantom Chapter Three, Rape (Novels) Decency warning graphic rape scene may be deemed offensive. [8,980 words] [Horror]
White Phantom Chapter Two (Novels) Beth and Maggie go through with it. [2,109 words] [Horror]
READER'S REVIEWS (2)
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"Compelling reading! you do feel drawn into the plot but can't help feeling it needs 'tightening up' in some places - the body description is so much more detailed than some other bits and I feel it would benefit from some more observations i.e. on the journey up the stairs to make the locking in the vault more dramatic. I do think it's compelling and original though and would love to read more" -- me.
"Great feedback thank you, this is just what I want. Good point and when I come to edit I'll see what I can do to make it more consistent. Maybe some 'telling' pictures on the stairs or something. Thank you....you. " -- Sooz, Barrow, Cumbria, England.

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STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
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